Now now, don’t panic. I think the little one is more fascinated with the mechanical Dominds than anything else. God what a sweety she is. Look at those big brown eyes and that little button nose. Just like any little kid, the wonders of the world fascinate. Nice work erin, as always you capture the innocence beautifully.
Now on another note, Why is Vane shoeing her iron beast? I would think with the way it’s built it would never need it.
The typeface is easy to read IF you don’t try too hard. Focus out and it leaps into easy intelligibility. Also, Vane possessed has not been kind to young ladies so far. God between her and evil. Erin has already violated Anglo-American conventions about animals and children being immune from injury in fiction quite enough …
That’s what scars me about Vane. The dark spirit that dwells within, even though thought to be extricated at on point, still it exist. Or at least it seems. Wouldn’t it be odd if Vane stuck up a friendship with this little girl. Nah. That ain’t gonna happen.
From the department of Never Say Never, I sense that the sprite might be an ancient archetype hiding in a child’s disguise, and may be what Vane needs to come back to herself.
Brother, that’s an interesting speculation. In deed, that would be quite the reverse of what I would be expecting. It is a nice thought though. We will soon see.
Oh it’s Vane.
Oh god the kid is looking at Vane.
OH F-CK!!!
Now now, don’t panic. I think the little one is more fascinated with the mechanical Dominds than anything else. God what a sweety she is. Look at those big brown eyes and that little button nose. Just like any little kid, the wonders of the world fascinate. Nice work erin, as always you capture the innocence beautifully.
Now on another note, Why is Vane shoeing her iron beast? I would think with the way it’s built it would never need it.
Very simple, my friend. She are installing the new leg. Remember of spare wheel.
Ah yes, that’s right. Thank you sir.
Well, we’ll see how much of Vane is left in this body. Perhaps the interest of the child as our avenger built her horse will pause her endless wrath.
One can only hope.
is any one else irritated by reading that font
LOL. I’m handling. Well as best I can anyway. ?
I’m too. A little hard on start, but after become easy!
yeah, I had to blow it up to read it, it’s a bit obtuse when there’s that much text.
Yes, me too. But I did get it. So It was Hunter that stole the fire. Hmm.
Please consider a different typeface for the print edition—or maybe even replace it now. This one subtracts more than it adds.
I think the use of that typeface is brilliant. It’s not that hard to read, and it’s a great way to indicate that they are not speaking English.
The typeface is easy to read IF you don’t try too hard. Focus out and it leaps into easy intelligibility.
Also, Vane possessed has not been kind to young ladies so far. God between her and evil. Erin has already violated Anglo-American conventions about animals and children being immune from injury in fiction quite enough …
That’s what scars me about Vane. The dark spirit that dwells within, even though thought to be extricated at on point, still it exist. Or at least it seems. Wouldn’t it be odd if Vane stuck up a friendship with this little girl. Nah. That ain’t gonna happen.
From the department of Never Say Never, I sense that the sprite might be an ancient archetype hiding in a child’s disguise, and may be what Vane needs to come back to herself.
Brother, that’s an interesting speculation. In deed, that would be quite the reverse of what I would be expecting. It is a nice thought though. We will soon see.