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on December 1, 2019
Chapter: Book 12: Short End
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  1. Coldesta Lelast Witch, Sorceress, Hex, Bruja,
    Coldesta Lelast Witch, Sorceress, Hex, Bruja,
    December 1, 2019, 10:17 pm | # | Reply

    Oh it’s Vane.

    Oh god the kid is looking at Vane.

    OH F-CK!!!

    • jsfury
      jsfury
      December 1, 2019, 11:16 pm | # | Reply

      Now now, don’t panic. I think the little one is more fascinated with the mechanical Dominds than anything else. God what a sweety she is. Look at those big brown eyes and that little button nose. Just like any little kid, the wonders of the world fascinate. Nice work erin, as always you capture the innocence beautifully.

      Now on another note, Why is Vane shoeing her iron beast? I would think with the way it’s built it would never need it.

      • Lucas
        Lucas
        December 2, 2019, 8:08 am | # | Reply

        Very simple, my friend. She are installing the new leg. Remember of spare wheel.

        • jsfury
          jsfury
          December 2, 2019, 10:54 am | # | Reply

          Ah yes, that’s right. Thank you sir.

    • Lucas
      Lucas
      December 2, 2019, 8:26 am | # | Reply

      Well, we’ll see how much of Vane is left in this body. Perhaps the interest of the child as our avenger built her horse will pause her endless wrath.

      • jsfury
        jsfury
        December 2, 2019, 10:55 am | # | Reply

        One can only hope.

  2. northbird
    northbird
    December 1, 2019, 10:20 pm | # | Reply

    is any one else irritated by reading that font

    • jsfury
      jsfury
      December 1, 2019, 10:52 pm | # | Reply

      LOL. I’m handling. Well as best I can anyway. ?

      • Lucas
        Lucas
        December 2, 2019, 8:13 am | # | Reply

        I’m too. A little hard on start, but after become easy!

    • Eoraptor
      Eoraptor
      December 2, 2019, 10:42 am | # | Reply

      yeah, I had to blow it up to read it, it’s a bit obtuse when there’s that much text.

      • jsfury
        jsfury
        December 2, 2019, 10:58 am | # | Reply

        Yes, me too. But I did get it. So It was Hunter that stole the fire. Hmm.

  3. Joseph
    Joseph
    December 2, 2019, 1:50 am | # | Reply

    Please consider a different typeface for the print edition—or maybe even replace it now. This one subtracts more than it adds.

    • Mustachio
      Mustachio
      December 2, 2019, 7:53 pm | # | Reply

      I think the use of that typeface is brilliant. It’s not that hard to read, and it’s a great way to indicate that they are not speaking English.

  4. Honzinator
    Honzinator
    December 2, 2019, 4:29 pm | # | Reply

    The typeface is easy to read IF you don’t try too hard. Focus out and it leaps into easy intelligibility.
    Also, Vane possessed has not been kind to young ladies so far. God between her and evil. Erin has already violated Anglo-American conventions about animals and children being immune from injury in fiction quite enough …

    • jsfury
      jsfury
      December 3, 2019, 6:58 am | # | Reply

      That’s what scars me about Vane. The dark spirit that dwells within, even though thought to be extricated at on point, still it exist. Or at least it seems. Wouldn’t it be odd if Vane stuck up a friendship with this little girl. Nah. That ain’t gonna happen.

      • Brother Parvus
        Brother Parvus
        December 6, 2019, 11:53 am | # | Reply

        From the department of Never Say Never, I sense that the sprite might be an ancient archetype hiding in a child’s disguise, and may be what Vane needs to come back to herself.

        • jsfury
          jsfury
          December 8, 2019, 9:22 pm | # | Reply

          Brother, that’s an interesting speculation. In deed, that would be quite the reverse of what I would be expecting. It is a nice thought though. We will soon see.

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