I didn’t realise that she was crossing her arms either. I guess showing a bit more of her hands would’ve clued me in before reading the comments. As it is now, only the trigger fingers show conclusively that her left hand is holding the right gun and vice versa. And apparently I didn’t pay enough attention to those two fingers. (Not that I was going to comment on it or anything, but since it was already brought up…)
I enjoy the art so far. The old Western style(no pun intended)of serious when it needs to be, while silly when it can be, while beautiful and pleasant to look at.
I love the fact that the female protagonist isn’t pretty! Such a refreshing change after reading so many comics with sexy girls with big boobs. I also love the art and the story so far, can’t wait to see what happens next!
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That looks…awkward. Not just the situation (AWK-waaaaard!), but the way she’s holding those guns.
It’s quite obvious that she’s got her arms crossed. It’s a perfectly natural pose.
That being said, this is a rad page. I like how surprised they are at suddenly looking down the barrel of a gun.
Augh! Beaten to the post while typing in the thing.
How so? There isn’t enough elbow room, I figured, to aim them any way but crossways.
I didn’t realise that she was crossing her arms either. I guess showing a bit more of her hands would’ve clued me in before reading the comments. As it is now, only the trigger fingers show conclusively that her left hand is holding the right gun and vice versa. And apparently I didn’t pay enough attention to those two fingers. (Not that I was going to comment on it or anything, but since it was already brought up…)
Hm, sorta instantly figured out she had crossed her hands.
Yup, the triggers fingered it out for me.
She wasn’t going take much more of their jabbering was she? 🙂
So she is gonna steel their chariot, complete with bucketloads of TNT?
Guess she wants to blow up some sunflowers.
(tourists=money=> our Arsonist will be there :O)
I enjoy the art so far. The old Western style(no pun intended)of serious when it needs to be, while silly when it can be, while beautiful and pleasant to look at.
Thank you kindly!
This makes me just giddy for the eventual page where we see a lot of really pretty SUNflowers. I know that will end up looking really awesome.
… dang it, I liked those guys!
I think my favorite detail here is the subtle “irregardless/regardless” correction.
That’s my favorite, too. Lawrence is so understated in his absolute sick-and-tiredness of Mark.
It’s interesting that the diamonds on her décolleté are eerily similar to Diamond’s markings. Foreshadowing?
I noticed that, too. There’s a lotta subtlety in this shindig-mcdougall. Me likey.
I love the fact that the female protagonist isn’t pretty! Such a refreshing change after reading so many comics with sexy girls with big boobs. I also love the art and the story so far, can’t wait to see what happens next!
time to go see the pretty flowers